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  1. WINNER - 65840935 - srasg56
  2. 65843279 - star-lightcox.net
  3. 66147033 - nhsia
  4. 66172619 - highc51239
  5. 66386536 - ocean171
  6. 66446376 - nzanga
  7. 66448411 - neptunekez

WINNER - 65840935 - srasg56

2.
It occurs twice in one sentence I
think
On page 4 paragraph I, the last
sentence. "was" should be deleted
before produced. - you may have
done this in the "fair" copy; and
of paragraph 2, why not "art
and learning"? That corresponds
to the Renaissance ideal surely. -
not Art alone? Otherwise I think
your alterations admirable thank
you very much for typing it so well.
Thank you so much for sending
me the Catalogue of the exhibition
and with Dandy as "Indicator",
I'm so glad he liked it and found
them well hung. I wonder if -
at this rate, I shall see the
exhibition myself for as we have
heard no word from Miller I
imagine he is not leaving the
flat on Monday. However I am
glad of your news of it. I will write
again to-morrow - more fully -

I want this to arrive on Monday.
I love you
Sylvia

65843279 - star-lightcox.net

2. It occurs 8 time's one sentence I think. In page 4 paragraph I, the last sentence. "was" should be deleted before produced - you may have done this in the "faire" copy; and of paragraph 2. why not "art and learning"? That corresponds to the Rennaisance ideals swell. - not Art along? Otherwise I think your alterations admirable thank you very much for typing it so well Thank you so much for sending me the Catalogne of the exhibition and with Dandy as "Indicator", I'm so glad he liked it and found them well ?. I wonder if - at this rate, I shall see the exhibition myself for as we have heard no word from Miller I imagine he is not leaving the flat on Monday. However I am glad of your news of it. I will write again tomorrow - more fully -

I want this to arrive on Monday - I love you - Sylvia

66147033 - nhsia

2. It occurs twice in one sentence I
think
On page 4 paragraph I, the last
sentence. "was" should be deleted
before produced. -- you may have
done this in the "fair" copy; and
of paragraph 2, why not "art
and learning"? That corresponds
to the Renaissance ideal surely. --
not Art alone? Otherwise I think
your alterations admirable, thank
you very much for typing it so well
Thank you so much for sending
me the Catalogue of the exhibition
and with Dandy as "Indicator"
I'm so glad he liked it and found
them well hung. I wonder if --
at this rate, I shall see the
exhibition myself for as we have
heard no word from Miller I
imagine he is not leaving the
flat on Monday. However I am
glad of your news of it. I will write
again to-morrow -- more fully --
I want this to arrive on Monday. I love you -
Sylvia

66172619 - highc51239

2. It occurs twice in one sentence I think.
On page 4 paragraph 1k the last sentence
, "was"should be deleted before produced.--you may have done this in the "fast" copy; and gt paragraph 2, why not "art and learning"? The corresponds to the Renaissance ideals quietly not Art alone? Otherwise I think your alterations admirable Thank you very much for typing it so well. Thank you so much for sending me this Catalogue of the exhibition and with Daudy as "Indicator", I'm so glad he liked it and found them well being I wonder if - at this rate, I shall see the exhibition myself, for as we have heard no word from Miller I imagine he is not leaving the flat on Monday. However I am glad of your news of it. I will write again tomorrow -more fully-
I want this to arrive on Monday. I love you.
Sylvia

66386536 - ocean171

It occurs twice in one sentence I
think
On page 4 paragraph I, the last
sentence. "was" should be deleted
before produced. You may have
done this in the "fair" copy; and
of paragraph 2, why not "art
and learning"? That corresponds
to the Renaissance ideals surely.
not Art alone? Otherwise I think
your alterations admirable thank
you very much for typing it so well
Thank you so much for sending
me the catalogue of the exhibits
and with Daudy as "Indicator"
I'm so glad he liked it and found
them well hung. I wonder if
at this rate, I shall see the
exhibition myself. For as we have
heard no word from Miller D
Mafine he is not leaving the
flat on Monday. However I am
glad of your neeos of it. I will write
again to-morrow more fully
I want this to arrive on Monday. I love you, Sylvia

66446376 - nzanga

2. It occurs twice in one sentence I think
On page 4 paragraph I, the last sentence "was" should be deleted before produced.-you may have done this in the "fair" copy; and of paragraph 2, why not " art and learning"? That corresponds to the Renaissance idea surely.- not Art alone? Otherwise I think your alterations admirable, thank you very much for typing it so well
Thank you so much for sending me the Catalogue of the exhibition and with Dandy as "Indicator" I'm so glad he liked it and found them well hung. I wonder if - at this rate, I shall see the exhibition myself for as we have heard no word from MIller I imagine he is not leaving the flat on MOnday. However I am glad of your news o f it. I iwll write again to-morrow - more fully-
I want this to arrive on Monday. I love you
Sylvia

66448411 - neptunekez

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