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  1. 71780802 - mlesullivan
  2. WINNER - 71795533 - RommelC
  3. 71813305 - wrightj2h
  4. 71868077 - wemily
  5. 72559872 - Sticker88
  6. 72720275 - Chris5420

71780802 - mlesullivan

to 11:30. As early as that it was warm enough to lie on the grass. I may go out again this afternoon for an hour or so.

That's too bad about Iris. However, why don't you do as she suggests and send your sketches to Lilliput - saying that Britannic & Eve suggested you should contact them?

Re-reading your story I like it even more. But why is Daphne 'a little mitthead'? She does not have the norchid purity of one of my characters the way you built her up: so, why 'mittered'? The way the points of view of the 2 girls changes during the course of their conversations is very skillful. Susan's self-betraying words to Basil are excellent: really, though, why don't you complete it with the 2 girls' reactions to Basil's proposal? The characters may be trivial, as you say, but that's no reason for drawing them away suddenly. That's what Mauriac does. Therefore, in the hope of your finishing it, I return your story.
Also, I enclose what I have done of the TV operetta.
This week I have several school lectures at the NG and the TG.
I love you, dearest Sylvia. Think of me. I adore you

love you
Lawrence

WINNER - 71795533 - RommelC

to 11.30. As early as that it was warm enough to lie on the grass. I may go out again this afternoon for an hour or so.

That's too bad about Iris. However,why don't you do as she suggests and send your sketches to ''Lilliput'- saying that 'Britannia & Eve' suggested you should contact them?

Re-reading your story I like it even more. But why is Daphne a little withered? She does not have the morbid purity of one of my characters the way you built her up:so, why, "withered"? The way the points of view of the 2 girls changes during the course of their conversation is very skillful. Susan's self-betraying words to Basil are excellent: really, though, why don't you complete it with the 2 girls' reactions to Basil's proposal? The characters may be trivial, as you say, but that's no reason for throwing them away suddenly. That's what Maurioc does. Therefore, in the hope of your finishing it, I return your story.

Also, I enclose what I have done of the TV operetta.

This week I have several school lectures at the NG and the TG.

I love you, dearest Sylvia. Think of me. I adore you

love you
Lawrence

71813305 - wrightj2h

to 11.30. As early as that it was warm enough to lie on the grass. I may go out again this afternoon for an hour or so.
That's too bad about Iris. however, why don't you do as she suggests and send your articles to Lilliput - saying that Britannia Aene suggested you should contact them?
Regarding your story I like it even more. By why is Daphne 'a little mittened'? She does not have the morbid purity of one of my characters the way you built her up: so, why, 'mittened'? The way the points of view of the 2 girls changes during the course of their conversation is very skillful. Susan's self betraying words to Basil are excellent: really, though, why don't you complete it with the 2 girls' reaction to Basil's proposal? The characters may be trivial, as you say, but that's no reason for throwing them away suddenly. That's what Maurice does. Therefore, in the hope of your finishing it, I return your story.
Also, I enclose what I have done of the TV operetta. This week I have several school lectures at the N.G. and the T.G.
I love you, dearest Sylvia. Think of me. I adore you.
Love you
Lawrence

71868077 - wemily

ti 11;30. As early as that it was warm enough to lie on the grass. I ma go out again this afternoon for an hour or so.

That's too bad about Iris. However, why don't you do asshe says - gents and send your sadtiles to Lillipet - saying that Britannia & Eve suggested you should contact them?

Re-reading your story I like it even more. But why is Daphne 'a little mittened' ? She does not have the morbid purity of one of my characters the way you built her up: so, why, 'mittenes'? The way the points of view of the 2 girls changes during the course of their conversation is very skilful. Susan's self - betraying words to Basil are excellent: really, though, why don't you with the 2 girls' reactions to Basil's proposal? the characters may be trivial ,as you say, but that's no reason for throwing them away suddenly. That's what Mauriac does. Therefore, in the hope of you finishing it, I return your story.

Also, I enclose what I have done of the TV operette.

This week I have several schoolectures at the NG and the TG.

I love you, dearest Sylvia. Think of me, I adore you

Love your Lawrence






72559872 - Sticker88

to 11.30. As early as that it was warm enough to lie on the
grass. I may go out again this afternoon for an hour or so.
That's too bad about Iris. However, why don;t you do as she sug-
gests and send you sketched to Lilliput - saying that Britannia
& Eve suggested you should contact them?
Re-reading you story I like it even more. But why is Daphne 'a
little withered'? She does not have the morbid purity of one of
my characters the way you built her up: so, why, 'withered'? The
way the points of view of the 2 charges during the course of their
conversation is very skillful. Susan's self betraying words to
Basil are excellent: really, though, why don't you complete it
with the 2 girls reactions to Basil's proposal? The characters
way he , as you say, But that's no reason for throwing
them away suddenly. That's what Mauriac does. Therefore,
in the hope of your finishing it, I return your story.
Also, I enclose what I have done if the TV operetta.
This week I have several school lectures at the NG and the TG.
I love you, dearest Sylvia. Think of me. I adore you
love you
Lawrence

72720275 - Chris5420

to 11.30. As early as that it was warm enough to lie on the grass. I may go out again this afternoon for an hour or so.

That's too bad about Iris. However, why don't you do as she sug-gests and send your sketches to Lilliput - saying that Britannia & Eve suggested you should contact them?

Re-reading your story I like it even more. But why is Daphne 'a little withead'? She does not have the morbid purity of one of my characters the way you built her up: so, why, 'withead'? The way the points of view of the 2 girls changes during the course of their conversation is very skillful. Susan's self-betraying words to Basil are excellent: really, though, why don't you complete it with the girls' reactions to Basil's proposal? The characters may be trivial, as you say, but that's no reason for throwing them away suddenly. That's what Maurice does. Therefore, in the hope of your finishing it, I return your story.

Also, I enclose what I have done of the TV operetta.

This week I have several schoollectures at the NG and the TG.

I love you, dearest Sylvia. Think of me. I adore you

love you
Lawrence

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